Jan and Mark

• “We were having a laugh”

  1. Making Adam scared and singiling him out from group
  2. Bullying Adam as a way of entertainment
  3. Pronoun - we - Gang vs Adam
  4. Audience feels sympathy towards Adam and dislikes the gang
  5. Links to society and how they want power in the gang
• “We stubbed out cigarettes on him”

  1. cruel + painful treatment causing harm
  2. declarative - lacking emotion and sympathy
  3. Cigarettes - plural - endless and continuous harm
  4. Empathy towards reader