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zainab faisal
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i was a nuisance tripping yapping falling always, but today its my
father
who keeps stumbling behind and will not go away
his
shoulders
globed like a
full sail
strung
i wanted to grow up and
plough
all i ever did was follow in his
broad
shadow
the sod rolled over without breaking. at the
headrig
with a single pluck of
reins
structure and form:
cyclical structure
- repition of stumbling
consonance
- " k sound" shows hardwork of father
inconsistent
rhyme