follower

Cards (5)

  • i was a nuisance tripping yapping falling always, but today its my father who keeps stumbling behind and will not go away
  • his shoulders globed like a full sail strung
  • i wanted to grow up and plough all i ever did was follow in his broad shadow
  • the sod rolled over without breaking. at the headrig with a single pluck of reins
  • structure and form:
    cyclical structure- repition of stumbling
    consonance- " k sound" shows hardwork of father
    inconsistent rhyme