before you were mine

Cards (9)

  • "shriek at the pavement"

    suggests a jovial playfull image, introducing theme of freedom and independence, potentially commenting on discrepancies between mothers and fathers after having a child
  • "marilyn."
    marilyn monroe was was iconic and a symbol of glamour- perhaps how duffy portays her mother. single word sentace empathises the seperation between her and her mother.
  • "the decade ahead of my loud possesive yell"

    the hyperoble shows a tone of regret that duffy caused her mother to lose the carefree nature of her earlier life
  • "before you were mine"

    repitition reinforces the serperation she feels from the earlier version of her mother but also sets a slightly ominous tone.
  • what is the form?
    has four equal stanzas, consistent form reflects the steady passage of time and the inevitable changes that time brings
  • what is the structure?
    poem begins and ends with the mother on the pavement yet initially she has freedom and ultimatley she has a daughter.
  • 3 key themes?
    admiration, nostalgia, self-critism
  • what is the context?
    duffy explores strong conventions of society and how women were exspected to behave and the poets mother completely opposes this
  • how might readers feel?
    sympathetic for duffy yet content that her mother was able to avoid steriotypical gender roles.