question 5

• time 


  50 mins to 1 hour
• do

  • pretend to be someone’s else
  • link to wider topics (sweep)
  • take one side
  • consider the other side in a counter argument but quickly dismiss
  • use structure and punctuation
  • use varied vocab
  • use correct format
  • notice who audience is
  • decide wether to be informal or formal
• don’t

  • rush it
  • leave only 30 mins
  • stick to the obvious point of vie
• include (RRREADSMFQC)

  repetition

  rhetorical question

  rule of 3

  emotive language

  anecdote

  direct address

  simile

  metaphor

  facts

  quote reliable source

  counter argument
• repetition example

  endless lives wasted….. endless lives continuously wasted
• rhetorical question example

  would you let your vunerable pet be belligerently exposed? what is the difference for animals being tested on? are they not worthy of compassion?
• rule of 3 example

  freedom, liberty, autonomy

  destruction, devastation, climate change
• emotive language example

  ceaselessly indoctrinated

  oppressive to our individualism

  undeniable uniqueness
• direct adress example


  YOU MUST recognise talent and not be blind sighted by money. YOU MUST not continually glamourise badly behaved celebrities. WE MUST encourage skill and not delinquency
• similie example

  wearing school uniform is alike to prohibiting an artist from using colour
• metaphor example

  innocent children, with hearts of gold, are servants to our sinful avariciousness
• facts and statistics

  on average 100 innocent children, exploited and suffering, die each day due to inhumane working conditions
• quoting a reliable source example

  the head nurse of the nhs commented

  the head of the nspcc commentef
• counter argument example

  although some schools may see uniform as a collective sense of identity, it is an infringement of the expression of identity
• structure

  introduction

  short sentence

  first point

  repetition of rule of 3

  second point

  third point

  counter argument

  conclusion

  rule of 3
• planning

  part 1- pick part of the statement to agree with and make a point

  part 2- off main point have 2 sub points

  part 3- choose 2 techniques for each point

  part 4- choose atleast 1 bit of punctuation per paragraph

  part 5- repeat 4 times
• what is SWEEP

  society

  world

  environment

  economy

  politics
• examples of different groups in society

  parents

  students

  the elderly

  immigrants

  minorities

  lgbtq+

  religious comminities
• societies sentence started

  • In today's society, we are faced with a myriad of challenges that...
  • It is undeniable that societies views on ... have drastically shifted in the past
  • What does it say about our society when we .... ?
  • You can't bypass that *insert* is detrimentally (negatively) affecting groups like ... in society.
• global sentence starters

  • Despite being one small planet in an infinite galaxy, we can't ignore the pressing problem of...
  • As inhabitants of the earth, it is of paramount importance that we recognise...
  • It is our duty as global citizens that we develop a collective global conscience in order
• specific global sentence starters

  • Pandemics do not recognise age, race, gender, countries or conflicts. This is why it is important that we rally together globally to...
  • Empowering disenfranchised communities who have been abandoned, neglected and alienated globally will cause...
  • Food scarcity is a widespread global phenomenon, effecting the 3rd world but also affecting some who live in...
  • emerging technology such as artificial intelligence could be posing a threat to the world as we know it as...
• environmental sentence starters

  • We are being ceaselessly reminded by Mother Nature
  • In the crux of an environmental crisis, there is an ever-growing demand
• specific environmental sentence starters 


  • there is one issue we should collectively attack, it is the issue that effects all of our homes. All of our lives. Global warming. It is inconceivable...
  • From destructive tornados to everlasting droughts, the extreme weather episodes are becoming more...
  • preservation of our beloved eco-systems requires a collective rally of environmentally conscious individuals who...
• economy sentence starters

  • As the rusted cogs of the economic machine begin to slow and worsen, this has a direct impact on...
  • The challenges of a tumultuous economy pose a threat to...
• effects of economic worsening sentence starters

  • As a result of ... this could exacerbate economic downturn. Already a potent consequence of this is the scarcity of jobs which leads...
  • The erosion of wages exacerbates the financial and emotional stress families have to endure
• general politics sentence starters

  • in the complex sphere of politics, one issue that is a byproduct of ...
  • The intensity of the political climate escalates, consequently causing...
• effects of politics sentence starters

  • Chaos. Disorder. Anarchy. A world absent of watertight regulations and policies. If we ignore ... we could cause this disaster
  • Democracy dances with economic excellence, without one, there can't be the other
  • Environmental policies are the building blocks to a more sustainable earth.
  • The fate of our healthcare hinges on the political decision we make regarding social welfare policies as...