THIRTEEN

Cards (7)

  • Themes
    memory- a wider view
    lonliness/isolation-in a london / lines written/ name
    conflict- a century
    power+ authority- a century
    opression- a century
    prejudice- a century
    injustice- a century
    education+ change- a century
    time- a century
  • “thirteen”
    literal age if speaker + connotates of youthfulness and vulnerability.
    Transition between childhood + adulthood = the poem tracks the premature loss of innocence
    Even as a youth, the speaker is subjected to the scrutiny and potential discrimination of law
    enforcement. Here, the poet emphasises that systemic racism can permeate various aspects of society,
    impacting the lives of marginalised individuals from a young age.
    13 is considered unlucky
  • “you will be four minutes from
    home
    when you are cornered by an officer”
    second person= confront reality + placed in position of the speaker
    Future tense + the modal verb “will” = inevitable encounter
    “Home” has connotations of a place of safety + security; this is violated by policeman
    Verb “cornered” creates sense of helplessness; there is a loss control for the speaker who is trapped in a threatening situation
  • “he told your class that
    you were all supernovas
    the biggest and brightest stars”
    “Class” = primary school + innocence
    The extended metaphor of the “star” is introduced
    “Supernovas”= aspiration, bright futures + potential
    Superlatives “biggest”, “brightest” implies opportunity and unrealised potential, but can also be read as insincere
  • “you power-less plump
    you will watch the two men cast lots for your organs“

    Adjectives + plosives “powerless” and “plump” = predatory nature of officer
    Contrasts to youthfulness + vulnerability of teenager
    Verb “watch” = speaker lacks agency
    ”Casting lots” is a biblical metaphor = emphasises the speakers lack of control and power
    Image of “organs” suggests a threat of violence
  • “how they are, in fact, dying stars
    on the verge of becoming black holes“

    Switch to factual tone “in fact” highlights the development across the poem from hope and opportunity to the speakers reality of discrimination
    Extended metaphor “dying stars” “black holes” = reflects the journey of promise to despair
  • -A boy is stopped by the police and told that he matches the description of a man who has
    committed a crime. The boy explains that he is thirteen years old.
    -The boy recognises one of the officers from an assembly at his old primary school – he
    remembers that the officer told his class that they were supernovas, a type of star.
    -The poem ends with the boy’s memory of his teacher explaining that supernovas are
    dying stars