personification of clouds suggests there's an external force with ulterior motives which are negatively affecting the couples relationship, alternatively familliar language empahsies the bad weather
reflects caged environment couple has been living in for past two days, could symbolise claustrophobia relationship presents to couple
the waterlogged earth gasping for breath at our feet
symbolises lack of communication within relationship
collective pronoun "our" shows there's hope for resolve, and relationship is lifelong despite adversity