climbing my grandfather

Cards (6)

  • i decide to do it free without a rope or net
    • element of peril or danger in getting to know grandfather. could reflect generational distance. alternatively, suggests familiarity as speaker is comfortable enough to climb without safety
    • present tense "decide" invloves reader and presents speaker as an active character
    • preposition without suggests independence and liberation
  • the skin of his finger is smooth and thick like warm ice
    • simple similie introduces childlike element
    • contrast to earlier in poem where skin is described as rough
    • oxymoron reveals complex nature of memory and nature
  • at his still firm shoulder, i rest for a while
    • shoulders are a symbol of bearing weight, so by describing as firm, places respect on grandfather + shows his resilience
    • rest connotes trust for grandfather
  • pull myself up
    • speaker gaining independence as hes circumnavigating around grandfather without his help
  • structure
    • first person, not direct adress: generational divide?
    • single unbroken stanza: relentless struggle of climbing mountain/ getting to know family
    • no specific syllable legnth or rhyme: natural conversation
  • form
    enjambement "i change/ direction traversing along his belt" :portrays literal change in direction while climbing