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• context

  based on experience of growing up in London + experience of Damilola Taylor - killed on the way home from the library + issues with racial profiling

  themes - identity / racism / social prejudice/ social class / loss of innocence / isolation

  links - name journeys / like an heiress
• "the biggest + brightest stars"

  mp - speaker recalling police visiting their primary

  superlative - emphasise potential of children / create vastness + brilliance, have a big future. Excessive use can be ironic

  metaphor "stars" - elevate status / unique / for good / fragile, foreshadowing short potential

  emotive adjective "brightness" - sense of hope / optimism / emotive power - heightened by contrast with later events > disillusionment and loss
• "two men cast lots for your organs"

  mp - speaker's encounter with police

  noun phrase "two men" - power imbalance / vulnerability of 13 yr old / contrast innocence with threatening adults

  verb phrase "cast lots" - dehumanisation / game of chance > speakers fate is redecided / religious connotations > should be determined by God but speaker is sacrificed

  concrete noun "organs" - objectifies speaker / strips humanity, treated as commodity
• "dying stars / on verge o becoming black holes"

  p - speaker reflects on police encounter

  enjambment - build suspense / draws attention to dying stars - mirror slow fading + doom

  adjective "dying" - vulnerability / loss of potential / contrast "brightest stars"

  noun "black holes" - symbolise destruction / swallowing light + destructive impact of systematic racism , inescapable