“My father a formidable looking man with a large stony jaw and furious black eyebrows“
Exposition Statement
In the exposition, the narrator describes his father as stoic and conventionally masculine it is evident he is critical of these traits embedding- his vivid memory of his father‘s appearance from his childhood.
Exposition AO1
Emotional gap and resentment, formal, menacing, caricature of a cartoon villain, awe, distance, not warm or nurturing image, severe, disciplinaria.
Exposition AO2
Cold, unemotional adjective ‘stony’- geological imagery, rock like, face carved from a cold stone rock, hidden depths of a cave
Menacing personification ‘furious’ eyebrows- life and intent of their own
The whole quote- threading/ villainous visual imagery
conjuring up a memory of father from childhood establishes they have never had a close relationship
Exposition AO3
Japanese working fathers/ long hours/ rarely present/ not hands on parents/ product of time/ adopted the role of a formal and sever parental figure
Exposition Pepper Quote
‘perhaps I should have been a more attentive father’- recognition partly responsible for distance
Mid-point Quote
‘a man of principle and honour’
Exposition
Who- the father about Wantanbe
What- killing of family and self
When- present
Mid-point Statement
The writer uses Wantanbe’s honour suicide to contrast the son’s modernity with the father
Mid-point AO1
Father is changing attitude; horrifically killed himself – family; Watanabe’s pride, identity and self-esteem rested on his professional competency and success; respect of suicide; perpetuates idea of shame; failure; toxic masculinity
Midpoint AO2
Dynamic character – shifts from traditional understanding of honour suicide to a more modern interpretation OR he declarative tone; abstract nouns
Mid-point AO3
His traditional view descends from Samurai culture was glorified ‘seppuku’; Japan has the highest suicide rate for a developed nation in the world(2017); difficult to shake off the inherited tradition and view of honour
WI- the writer uses the sons progressive values to trigger a change in the fathers attitude to stoicism, self sacrifice and focused on career
Mid-point Pepper Quote
‘took his whole family with him’
Denouement Quote
‘We fell silent once more‘
Denouement Statement
In the denouement, the silent motif is repeatedly used to reinforce the lack of communication; father and son are still restrained and isolated
Denouement AO1
Lack of conversation, no bond, lack of empathy, distract, suspicion, unspoken disappointment, tragedy, fear, an expressible guilt, inability to communicate, absence of mother is audible
Denouement AO2
Echoes, continue from start to end(a lot) Motif reinforces lack of communication between father and son,
Clipped sentences, son was hit for chattering,
Domestic setting contrast situation/relationship between father and son. Home=warm cosy