Word choice of 'slounge' -combination of slouch and lounge -suggests that the shark moved in a gentle relaxed manner
is a thing that happened once (too often) to me
he has no control and build mystery/ suspense
i count as gain
on reflection he sees this interaction as valuable
that once i met
initially shock has worn off as the word choice of "met" suggests he now sees him as an equal
sea tin-tacked with rain
metaphor/pathetic fallacy - compares the raindrops to tacks suggesting the rain was painful when it hit and thus the experience was painful
That roomsized monster with a matchbox brain
metaphor - sees him as inferior
he shoggled me
word choice - colloquialism meaning shook or moved. shows that he still has no control
this decadent townee
word choice of 'decadent' suggests elegant sophistication which contrasts with the simple colloquialism of 'townee' given to someone from the city by the island dwellers
shook on a wrong branch of his family tree
word choice of 'family tree' suggests the prehistoric connection between all living things reminding us that were all related
emerging from the slime of everything
word choice - has connotations of Darwin's theory of evolution and that all living things are connected by a common ancestor
so who's the monster?
rhetorical question - reflecting on the destruction caused by the human race
the tall fin slid away and then the tail
lasting impression is not a monster but a beautiful creature