in paris with you

• "I'm one of your talking wounded"
• "I'm in Paris with your eyes, your mouth, [...] all points south"
• "the hotel walls are peeling"
• lack of contraction in "Do you mind if we do not go"
• present progressive tense of "Learning who you are, / Learning what I am"
• poem ends with "I'm in Paris with you"
• middle stanza indented