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the manhunt
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Cards (13)
'the manhunt'
the definite article in the title shows that this is a personal story
'after the first phase'
there will be multiple phases to this mental state
'after passionate night and intimate days'
rhyming couplet emphasises intimacy and fragmented lines mirror mental state
'would he let me trace the frozen river which ran through his face'
metaphor for physical and mental scars that he kept to himself
'only then would he let me explore the blown hinge of his lower jaw'
shows his physical wounds and he became more comfortable over time
'porcelain collar bone'
emphasises his fragility
'rudder of
a
shoulder blade'
inanimate object showing he's trying to find direction
'parachute silk
of his
punctured lung'
parachutes don't work if they are punctured, and they are meant to keep you alive
'climb
the
rungs'
showing the steps taken by the couple towards recovery and healing
'feel the hurt'
she can empathise with him, it's impacted them both
'skirting along'
treading on eggshells, trying not to do anything to reverse their progress
'foetus of metal'
symbolic of the new chapter in their lives
'sweating
,
unexploded mine'
he is this way because of war, have to be careful as it is unexploded