living space

Cards (5)

  • "the whole structure leans dangerously towards the miraculous"

     'dangerously' and 'miraculous'
    • juxtaposition of negative and positive; a change from danger and hardship to the idea of aspiring towards ‘…the miraculous.’
    • This introduces the poet’s own feelings, her admiration for their resilience.
    • gives a sense of hope
  • "someone has squeezed a living space"

    'squeezed'
    • hints to overcrowding in the area
    • suggests that the living space is cramped, constricted, or limited.
    'living space'
    •  emphasizes that this is where people reside, highlighting the struggle for survival.
  • "someone has squeezed a living space"
    • symbolizes the resilience and resourcefulness of those living in poverty.
    • The act of “squeezing” implies determination, adaptability, and the human spirit’s ability to find hope even in adverse conditions.
    • suggests that the problem isn’t just about individual choices but also about systemic challenges.
    • People are forced to make do with limited resources, and their living spaces reflect this struggle.
  • "fragile curves of white hung over the dark edge"

    'curves of white'
    • refers to the eggs
    • eggs symbolise new beginnings, hope and life
    • eggs represent the miracle of existence within adversity.
    • represents purity and innocence
     'dark edge'
    • represents danger, uncertainty, and the precariousness of life in the slums.
    'hung out'
    • implies that these eggs are placed intentionally, perhaps as an act of faith or defiance.
  • "thin walls of faith"
    • The juxtaposition of fragility (eggshells) and faith (walls) underscores the paradox of existence in the slums.
    • positive yet implies fragility - faith could be similar to egg shell(easy to break)
    • Faith is often intangible, yet it provides a sense of security and hope.
    • Just as the eggs hang over the edge, faith teeters on the brink of uncertainty.
    • The act of placing the eggs represents an act of faith, defying the odds.