exposure

• form: pararhyme - exposing how the men's lives are cut short by the war.

  -waiting for the rhyme to end and be fulfilled , waiting for the war to end.
• our brains ache , in the merciless iced east winds that knive us
• slowly our ghosts drag home
• for love of god seems dying
• All their eyes are ice
• But nothing happens.
• We turn back to our dying