BULLET POINT— which is the more convincing reason?- Q6
use PEEL structure- 2 paragraphs
One para per bullet point plus a conclusion
highest marks are based on quality of judgment so be evaluative
add a mini conclusion at the end of each para to link back to the Q and explain a judgement on how far that factor led to the outcome in the Q
precise, specific and relevant supporting evidence is needed for both points and link back to the question