As Imperceptibly as Grief: ‘‘As imperceptibly as grief the summerlapsed away' - Metaphor. Autumn is the death of summer. Sense of loss. Slow pace. Melancholy.
As imperceptibly as grief: ‘a quietness distilled’ - Metaphor. Autumn is minimal, less than summer. Quietness and calm. Serene. Juxtaposes noise and life of summer. Focus on time and loss. Preparing for death.
As imperceptibly as grief: ‘as Twilight long begun’ - Metaphor – gradual change, invevitable, slow and simple emergence of dusk
As imperceptibly as grief: ‘withoutWing or service of a Keel’ - Metaphor. Both “wing” and “keel” suggest something helpful used to travel. “Summer” leaves without aid of those things once again portrays how the seasonal changes are a cycle that has never been stopped.
As imperceptibly as grief: ‘made her lightescape into the Beautiful’ - Metaphor. Personification of autumn as going to heaven. Death as positive journey. Time passing seen as natural end to life, not being the end. Wistful and positive.
Ozymandias: ‘a shatteredvisage lies’ - 'Shattered' is a adjective, immediate sense of his ruination, his power has gone. 'Lies', powerless, on the ground, weak, discarded by history.
Ozymandias: ‘two vast and trunklesslegs of stone’ - Trunkless, reiterates idea that power is transient. Legs, emphasise strength but with no ‘trunk’ there is nothing left of his power, nothing with which to rule. 'Vast', the scale of his power in his time
Ozymandias: ‘sneer of coldcommand’ - Hard alliteration reflects the cruelty of a tyrannical ruler, 'Sneer' verb emphasises disdain for those he ruled over
Ozymandias: ‘look on my works, yeMighty, and despair’ - His arrogance emphasised again, Imperative tone.
Ozymandias: ‘thelone and levelsandsstretch far away’ - the natural world has more power than any human ruler, human power is transient ,a message of optimism in a dark time.