Analysis

Cards (19)

  • "He sat in a wheeled chair" --> soldier is in a passive state **DISABLED**
    • he has no autonomy or independence - dependant on others
    • PRONOUN "he" -->no one sees him as an individual with an identity, highlights the fact that this is a universal story
  • "waiting for dark" --> soldier is in a passive state **DISABLED**
    • METAPHOR --> could represent death, which would allow him to escape his life.
    • euphemism for death, his future is dark
    • VERB --> indicates passivity, dependence and trapped, sense of hopelessness
  • "ghastly suit of grey" --> impact of WAR **DISABLED**
    • ALLITERATION --> institutionalised, lost vitality and life
    • irony - he wanted to wear a uniform and be a soldier but now it is not what he wanted
    • colour imagery - mourning, death, monotony of life --> reflects dull and lifeless mood
  • "Voices of boys ... voices of play" --> impact of WAR **DISABLED**
    • mourning his youth --> young man but presented as old
    • positive connotations of boys playing contrasts melancholic tone of a hymn
    • surrounded by joy but cant partake in it - emphasises his loneliness
  • "threw away his knees" --> REGRET/RECKLESS **DISABLED**
    • highlighting naïvete of soldier and futility of war - suggests that it is his fault
    • blunt tone - showing the carelessness of his actions
  • "Now, he is old" --> impact of WAR **DISABLED**
    • aged him prematurely
    • he has emotionally and mentally matured as well
    • physical toll
    • detrimental impact
  • "leap of purple spurted from his thigh" --> impact of WAR **DISABLED**
    • purple is a patriotic colour - mocking the glorification of war
    • losing patriotism --> literally leaping or spurting from him
    • refrence to the blood - shows the physical pain and suffering that soldiers have to go through
  • "- He wonders why." --> REGRET/RECKLESSNESS **DISABLED**
    • "-" indicating reflection
    • RETROSPECTIVE COMMENT
    • thinking about his past decisions --> reckless and impulsiveness
    • CAESURA --> he is actually taking a pause to reflect, now understands how naïve he was
  • "smiling they wrote his lie" --> treatment by OTHERS **DISABLED**
    • sadistic, heartless --> don’t care about the soldier
    • sinister and menacing
    • indicates that he is really young, vulnerable and naïve
  • "he was drafted out with drums and cheers" --> treatment by OTHERS **DISABLED**
    • happy to send him away but don't want him back
  • "inquired about his soul" --> treatment by OTHERS **DISABLED**
    • melancholic tone
    • polite, doesn’t really care, no respect/warmth
    • sense of detachment --> emphasises soldier's loneliness
    • a priest - no family or friends
  • "Why don't they come and put him to bed?" --> in a PASSIVE state **DISABLED**
    • repetition, rhetorical questions --> indicates his increasing despair
    • shows his life is not worth living
    • he wants people, but no one will answer his questions
    • seeking care and love “put him into bed” --> craves that compassion but is not receiving it
    • PRONOUN --> dependent, no autonomy
  • "the fields of sunflowers scorched by the dry wind" --> lev exp HARDSHIPS in the PAST **SIG CIGS**
    • Rural scenery --> idyllic and picturesque
    • CONTRAST --> Sense of hardship underneath this, reflects his mixed feelings about leaving home.
  • "leather jacket and jeans and a leather cap" --> lev exp HARDSHIPS **SIG CIGS**
    • Simple description --> Clear that he does not have a lot of money
    • Syndetic list shows that he is dressed simply
  • "clutched an old red cotton handkerchief and a dented pack of Russian cigarettes" --> lev is VULNERABLE + ISOLATED **SIG CIGS**
    • scared and nervous --> vulnerable in this situation, anxious and apprehensive
    • Presented as almost child-like despite us knowing he is an older man
    • Source of comfort --> Clinging onto his culture and source of comfort
  • “I’m sorry, but there is no smoking allowed on this bus” --> Lydia is ASSERTIVE/ENCOURAGING **SIG CIGS**
    • ASSERTIVE TONE --> direct, confident, DECLARATIVE SENTENCE
    • Contrasts Lev --> tries to avoid eye contact and pulls down cap etc.
  • "fifty hours or more" --> lev exp HARDSHIP in the PAST **SIG CIGS**
    • emphasises low financial situation --> can't take a plane
  • "separate aches and dreams" --> diff reasons for MOVING **SIG CIGS**
    • lev aches while lydia dreams
    • shows different reasons for moving
    • surprises reader - the cliché of ‘hopes and dreams’ is altered to show the grim reality of the situation
  • "like a married couple" --> RELATIONSHIP **SIG CIGS**
    • SIMILE --> Journey is going to force them together
    • Shows how uncomfortable the journey is going to be
    • Shows how intimate it is going to be