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"He sat in a wheeled chair" --> soldier is in a passive state **DISABLED**
he has no
autonomy
or
independence
-
dependant
on
others
PRONOUN
"he" -->no one sees him as an
individual
with an
identity
, highlights the fact that this is a
universal
story
"waiting for dark" --> soldier is in a passive state **DISABLED**
METAPHOR
--> could represent
death
, which would
allow
him
to
escape
his
life.
euphemism
for
death
, his future is
dark
VERB
--> indicates
passivity
,
dependence
and
trapped
, sense of
hopelessness
"ghastly suit of grey" --> impact of WAR **DISABLED**
ALLITERATION -->
institutionalised
, lost
vitality
and
life
irony
- he wanted to
wear
a
uniform
and be a
soldier
but now it is
not
what he
wanted
colour imagery
-
mourning
,
death
,
monotony
of
life
--> reflects
dull
and
lifeless
mood
"Voices of boys ... voices of play" --> impact of WAR **DISABLED**
mourning
his
youth
-->
young
man but presented as
old
positive
connotations
of boys playing
contrasts
melancholic
tone
of a hymn
surrounded by
joy
but
cant
partake
in it - emphasises his
loneliness
"threw away his knees" --> REGRET/RECKLESS **DISABLED**
highlighting
naïvete
of
soldier
and
futility
of
war
- suggests that it is his
fault
blunt
tone
- showing the
carelessness
of his
actions
"Now, he is old" --> impact of WAR **DISABLED**
aged
him
prematurely
he has
emotionally
and
mentally
matured
as well
physical
toll
detrimental
impact
"leap of purple spurted from his thigh" --> impact of WAR **DISABLED**
purple
is a patriotic colour -
mocking
the
glorification
of
war
losing
patriotism
--> literally
leaping
or
spurting
from him
refrence to the
blood
- shows the
physical
pain
and
suffering
that soldiers have to go through
"- He wonders why." --> REGRET/RECKLESSNESS **DISABLED**
"-" indicating reflection
RETROSPECTIVE
COMMENT
thinking about his
past decisions
-->
reckless
and
impulsiveness
CAESURA
--> he is actually taking a
pause
to
reflect
, now understands how
naïve
he was
"smiling they wrote his lie" --> treatment by OTHERS **DISABLED**
sadistic
, heartless -->
don’t
care
about the soldier
sinister
and
menacing
indicates that he is really
young
,
vulnerable
and
naïve
"he was drafted out with drums and cheers" --> treatment by OTHERS **DISABLED**
happy to
send
him
away
but don't want him
back
"inquired about his soul" --> treatment by OTHERS **DISABLED**
melancholic
tone
polite
, doesn’t really
care
, no
respect
/
warmth
sense of
detachment
--> emphasises soldier's
loneliness
a
priest
- no
family
or friends
"Why don't they come and put him to bed?" --> in a PASSIVE state **DISABLED**
repetition
,
rhetorical
questions
--> indicates his
increasing
despair
shows his life is
not
worth living
he wants
people
, but no one will answer his
questions
seeking
care
and
love
“put him into bed” --> craves that
compassion
but is
not
receiving
it
PRONOUN
-->
dependent
, no
autonomy
"the fields of sunflowers scorched by the dry wind" --> lev exp HARDSHIPS in the PAST **SIG CIGS**
Rural scenery --> idyllic and
picturesque
CONTRAST
--> Sense of
hardship
underneath this, reflects his
mixed
feelings
about leaving home.
"leather jacket and jeans and a leather cap" --> lev exp HARDSHIPS **SIG CIGS**
Simple
description --> Clear that he does
not
have
a
lot
of
money
Syndetic
list
shows that he is dressed simply
"clutched an old red cotton handkerchief and a dented pack of Russian cigarettes" --> lev is VULNERABLE + ISOLATED **SIG CIGS**
scared
and
nervous
-->
vulnerable
in this situation,
anxious
and
apprehensive
Presented as almost
child-like
despite us knowing he is an
older man
Source of
comfort
--> Clinging onto his
culture
and source of
comfort
“I’m sorry, but there is no smoking allowed on this bus” --> Lydia is ASSERTIVE/ENCOURAGING **SIG CIGS**
ASSERTIVE
TONE -->
direct
,
confident
,
DECLARATIVE
SENTENCE
Contrasts
Lev
--> tries to
avoid
eye
contact
and
pulls
down
cap
etc.
"fifty hours or more" --> lev exp HARDSHIP in the PAST **SIG CIGS**
emphasises
low
financial situation --> can't take a
plane
"separate aches and dreams" --> diff reasons for MOVING **SIG CIGS**
lev
aches
while lydia dreams
shows
different
reasons
for moving
surprises
reader - the
cliché
of
‘hopes
and
dreams’
is altered to show the
grim
reality
of the situation
"like a married couple" --> RELATIONSHIP **SIG CIGS**
SIMILE
--> Journey is going to
force
them
together
Shows how un
comforta
ble the journey is going to be
Shows how
intimate
it is going to be