Plan

• Plan - Part 1;

  1. Start with a verb or statement, which links to the title.
  2. Introduce yourself and a second character. Which is the opposite of you, emphasising the differences. Also usually the ‘bad’ person. End paragraph with linking back to title.
  3. Set the background of where the story takes place. Pick a specific things to describe in detail and mention the second character.
  4. Speech and hint about the upcoming problem/ cause of it and the feeling it creates (SHOW not tell).
• Plan - Part 2;

  
  

  5. Build up to the problem, start to mention what causes the problem example Then hint at what the problem will be, so it isn’t sudden. Tell feelings that character has when this happens.

  6. Problem happens, shouldn’t be sudden as it was slowly hinted at in other paragraphs. Describe in slow motion.

  7. Reaction of character and feelings   and body's physical reaction. How other characters, who were around, reacted to the problem. Also link back to the second character -  makes you realise they are a bad person, and link back to the title.