to warn Scrooge about his futurelife if he doesn'tchange
to warn the upperclass about their future if they don'tchange
Scrooge's reaction
strange - he listens to Marley - when he was in the townbeforeMarleycame, he was seen ignoringmostpeople and being arrogant and rude to those he knew such as Fred
shows changealready as he listens to the ghost - spirit has a force over Scrooge as it inducesfear in him - this suggestsScroogealready knows his weakness but feels its toolate to change
scrooge's reaction
'IthinkI'drathernot'
'I', 'I'd' - personalpronoun - shows how Scrooge has control of the situation - he discardsMarley'swarning
contrast when with Present and Future- 'Conductmeasyouwill', Scroogebentdownononeknee'
'Marleywasdead; tobeginwith'
firstline in the novella
makesreader have so many questions - Who is Marley?, Why is he dead?
''was' = pasttense - is he notdeadanymore
'dead' - shocksreader, they didn'texpect a novella labelled ChristmasCarol to start on such a depressingnote - could show how Christmas is nothappy for all
'beginwith' - implies he's comingback - clause, reinforces the firststatement
'Old Marley wasasdeadasadoornail'
'old' - adjective - reinforces he's dead as he is old - shows relation to the mainprotagonist (Scrooge) as it hints at pastknowledge of the man
'deadasadoornail' - simile - shows how Marley is verydead - alliteration - 'd' - the sound imitatesbodiesthudding to the floor which also emphasises how deadMarley is
foreshadows how Marley'sface is portrayed as a doornail when Scroogereturnshome
'Marley'sface.Marley'sface'
repetition - emphasis
shows disbelieve from Scrooge as we know Marley is dead but Scrooge is seeing his face
'thecellardoorflewopenwithaboomingsound'
'cellardoor' - noun - heavy, shows how a greatforce must have been used to openit
'flew' - verb - shows the power behind the opening as they travelledquicklymidair
'open' - leaves Scrooge vulnerable - nothing is there to protect him as the barrier (doors) have been opened - foreshadows how he is vulnerable to change
'booming' - adjective - loud,noticeable - Scroogecan'tescape the sound
'thesameface : theverysame'
'same' - repeated - shows how deathhasn'teffectedMarley as he was in Purgatory - could imply that the effectsMarleyleft on those he used for money didn't die with him - they are still in debt
'verb' - hints at shock - Marley hasn't changed at all - ironic as Marley has learnt his lesson - changed on the inside
':' - colon - pause - Scrooge is trying to see a difference but can't - shock
'thechainhedrewwasclaspedaroundhismiddle.'
'chain' - forged for life - industrialrevolution - hard to break
'hedrew' - noonehelped him as he was the only oneresponsible for his currentstate
'claspedaroundhismiddle' - uncomfortable - requires a lot of strength - strenuoustask to hold them for 7 years
'I' - personalpronoun - no one else is to do/blame what he is doing/done
'chain' - industrialrevolution - hard to break
'forged' - verb - strenuoustask - easier to be nice
'linkbylinkandyardbyyard' - repetition, alliteration - shows the length of the chain and how each individualexperience has effectedMarley
'Mankindwasmybusiness'
'mankind' - noun - people who he manipulated
'was' - shows how he has changed, he is not the person he was
'my' - he felt he ownedpeople as they tookmoney from him
'business' - his solepurpose was to make money from the poorpeople who needed help
emotionless
'Icannotrest.Icannotstay. Icannotlingeranywhere'
'Icannot' - repeated - shows how Marley is veryrestricted in his past life - he hadtoomuchfreedom and power when he was alive - he abused it - now he has to suffer like the people he exploited
'rest','stay''lingeranywhere' - Pleasantries - Marley's life is now tiresome, nomadic and uncertain like the workingclasspeople
'why' - questioning his life choices as he has now been set on an afterlife of pain - createssympathy as he regrets
'I' - noone else to blame but himself
'crowds' - noun - emphasiseshowmanypeople need help
'fellowbeings' - we are allone - everyone should helpeveryone else
'myeyes' - he has control of what he see's like the richpeople - they choosenottooseethose who need help because they are greedy - PoorLaw got people off streets so they wouldn't have to deal with them
'turneddown' - shows how the richneglected the poor