heightened emotions - suggest excitement when the soldiers are actually panicking
soldiers are presented as unprepared - rejecting traditional image of wartimeheroism
" guttering, choking, drowning'
triplet for effect - emphasises words - semantic field of death
'ing' - present continuous - verbs emphasise that the actions feel immediate and inescapable for the narrator
repetition of 'drowning' (in stanza 2) and the fact that it is rhymed with itself emphasises that the image is stuck in the speaker's mind
horrific images in the poem, contradict the idealisticdepictions of war
'come gargling from the froth- corrupted lungs
makes reader feel disgust
victim of mustard gas
vivid description presents the horrors of war
gruesome imagery
context
Wilfred Owen was killed in action on 4 November 1918 one week before the signing of the Armistice, which ended the FirstWorldWar.
His mother received the telegram informing her of his death on Armistice Day, as the church bells were ringing out in celebration.
structure
first stanza - slow, turgid pace due to the first sentence layering clause on top of clause - turgid tone, reflecting the soldiers’ feeling that the march will never end.
second stanza - fast paced through one word sentences and exclamation marks - reflects the sense of panic as the gas attack unfolds.
pace slows in final stanza - reflecting the feeling that war is never ending - uses the second person (“you”, “my friend”) to address the reader personally - uncomfortable and accusatory tone. These final lines are clearly aimed at those in command.
knock-kneed, coughing like hags
Continues the degradation ”like hags' evoking images of the elderly and sickly.
alliteration - (knock-kneed, coughing) creates a choppy, harsh rhythm to mimic their staggering movement
This portrays the soldiers as far from strong and noble, reinforcing the poem’s anti-heroic tone