“The clerk’s fire was so very much smaller that it looked like one coal.”
Metaphor “one coal”: Emphasises extreme cold and deprivation — Bob’s workspace is not just poorly heated; it’s barely heated at all. It reflects how little warmth or care Scrooge provides
Visual imagery: The reader can clearly imagine the tiny, inadequate fire, highlighting Bob’s powerlessness and suffering
Contrast: Implied between Scrooge’s office and Bob’s — Scrooge hoards comfort while Bob endures hardship
Effect: Dickens uses this small detail to symbolise the broader cruelty of employer exploitation during the Victorian era
“My little, little child!” cried Bob. “My little child!”
Repetition and diminutive “little”: Increases the sense of vulnerability and loss
The doubling makes the grief feel raw and overwhelming
Exclamation and direct speech: Brings emotion to the surface — the reader hears Bob’s heartbreak first-hand.
Simple, heartfelt language: Dickens avoids poetic phrasing here, which makes it feel more real and devastating
Effect: The plainness of the language heightens the pathos — Dickens makes Bob a vessel of relatable human sorrow
“Mr. Scrooge! I give you Mr. Scrooge, the Founder of the Feast!”
Capitalised “Founder of the Feast”: Ironically grand language — Bob is being respectful and thankful despite Scrooge’s meanness
Exclamation marks: Suggest Bob is sincere and cheerful, even when talking about someone who treats him badly
Tone of gratitude: This shows Bob’s generosity of spirit — he’s thankful even for the little he has
Effect: Dickens uses this line to contrast Bob’s warmth and dignity with Scrooge’s coldness, showing moral richness despite material poverty
“He ran home to Camden Town as hard as he could pelt, to play at blind-man’s buff.”
Energetic verb “ran” and phrase “as hard as he could pelt”: Suggest youthful energy and joy — despite his exhaustion, Bob is excited to be with his family
Juxtaposition: The joyful, childlike language contrasts with his poverty, showing Bob’s emotional richness even in hardship
Effect: Dickens presents Bob as emotionally wealthy — generous, loving, and joyful in contrast to Scrooge’s isolation