Through the poem, “the spirit is too blunt an instrument” Anne Stevenson takes an unorthodox, biologicalapproach to the miracle of birth.
Through her clinicaltone and use of a varietyoftechniques, Stevenson successfully excludes the romantic, beautifulaspectofbirth.
Stevenson uses techniques to suggest that the spiritisn’tneeded to create a perfectly functioning baby.
The use of an analogy in the quote, “thechainofthedifficultspine” is ironic as babies are usually quite flexible due to their incompleteskeletalstructure.
The use of alliteration in the phrase, “blind bones” mimics the loud, chaotic sound of a drum reflecting how loud and chaotic babies are.
Stevenson describes smallerbodyparts,“distincteyelashes” or “sharpcrescentfingernails” to emphasize the depth of complexity in the human body.
Each part of the body contributes to the whole, creating this perfectbaby.
Through the quote, “completed body” we understand that Stevenson could have used the word perfect however, she wants to takeaway any sense of emotion in order to show how the body is just a finishedprocess.
The poem consists of threestanzas each ninelines long.
The poem is composed of free verse so there is neither a rhymescheme or metricalrhythm.
Rhyme and rhythm are communicated using literarymethods such as enjambent, and asyndeton.
The effective use of asyndeton reinforces the idea that the processofcreation doesn’t need emotion.
The use of enjambmentrequires the reader to move onto the nextline to find out what happens next.
There are many parts of the child’sbody that aren’t observable and that one needs to “imagine” instead.
In the last stanza, the tone becomes more assertive hence challenging the reader this is shown through the use of the word, “No”.
The choice of the word “habit” suggests a routine which links to something mechanical.
The baby was made perfectly because of habit,notemotion.
The use of a polysyndeton contrasts the previousstanzas and therefore the speaker communicates their negativeemotions about love more clearly.
The speaker links love to negativefeelings and emotions,“despairandanxiety” which forms an antithesis to the perfection of the body.