Remains

Cards (9)

  • 'every round as it rips through his life'
    'legs it up the road'
    Shows colloquialism as the speaker takes a conversational tone
  • 'somebody else and somebody else'
    'all of the same mind'
    'Somebody else' shows the forgetful nature of war through deliberately keeping the people nameless
    Perhaps in the grand scheme of things their names don't matter but there actions do?
    'all' shows that all soldiers are united in purpose
  • 'on another occasion'
    One of many times that something traumatic has happened
    Desensitisation is shown through the casual nature of the phrase
  • 'End of story, except not really'
    PTSD?
    Can't escape the haunting memories
  • 'But I blink and he bursts again'
    Enjambment is reflective of the rushed mindset
    Can be reflective of the rush that the man was in?
    Reliving event and the repeated guilt that comes along with it
    Could be aggressive due to the word 'bursts'
  • 'his bloody life in my bloody hands'
    He still takes responsibility for the deaths
    The 2 different types of bloody shown are the colloquial version and the literal blood covered version
  • 'probably armed, possibly not'
    Tries to convince himself that the man was armed through the use of the adverb 'probably' showing that it was the most likely outcome
    Potentially to help deal with the guilt?
  • 'the drink and the drugs won't flush him out'
    Shows how PTSD victims try to deal with their mental trauma
    Mix of recreational drugs and medicinal drugs
  • 'blood-shadow stays on the street'
    Links in to the title as it remains
    Lingering effects of war being not just about the casualties but the mental struggle that comes along with it