'Cannon to the right of them; cannon to the left of them'
• Highlights the violence
• Highlights how helpless the soldiers are to defend themselves against the onslaught of enemy fire
• Shows how their fate is inescapable
'Theirs not to make reply'
• Suggests the soldiers lack control over their fate
• Repetition of 'theirs' emphasises the true heroes of the story
• Highlights the heroism of the soldiers
'Volley'd and thunder'd;'
• Thudding/ echoing quality like distant guns or cannon fire