After passionate nights and intimate daysjuxtaposition if night and day stills shows there was no difference and they are still in their honeymoon phase
The frozen river that ran though his facemetaphor shiws that he is stuck in time and that in the surface he is numb but underneath there is still a current and that he is hidingemotions
Damaged porcelaincollar bone the adjective porcelain shows that the speaker feels that he is beautiful and too perfect like a china bowl
The parachute of silk of his punctured lung juxtaposition of parachute and silk shoes that he is durable yet beautiful also shoes that he is valuable to her
2 line stanzas shows them being together
The foetus of metal beneath his chest
Where the billet finally come to rest
Every nerve in his body Has tightened and closed
Only then did I come close shows that it took him a long time to recover and let people close
Irregular rhyme scheme shows that this was very unexpected.alternatively is could show that he is suffering PTSD and could be triggered at any moment
” unexplored mine buried deep in his mind” enjambement shows he has carried if for a while
Semantic field of anatomy which shows the exploration of his damage and how extreme it was
Context
simon armitage
in the film the poem is read by the wife of the soldier who served as a peacekeeper in bonsnia after being discharged due to injury and depression
poem is intimate and replicate the human cost of conflict