describes places, people, objects, or events using appropriate details.
uses a variety of sensory details
Description:
Makes writing more lively, interesting, and indicates writer’s attitude toward the subject through the choice of words details.
Diction
the choice and use of words and phrases in speech or writing.
Sense of Sight
Visual details, are incorporated into writing. It transmits mental images to the mind of the reader.
Sense of Smell
Olfactory details can help set the mood of what is written and trigger the reader’s other senses.
Sense of Hearing
Hearing details can make something dramatic. When the writer puts sounds into words, the reader hears what the characters are experiencing.
Sense of Taste
It is a personal sense so it is a little less important in most fiction writing.
Sense of Touch
Tactile details motivate readers to discover the world around them by feeling and learning the texture.
2 Kinds of Description
Objective: Informative and appeals to the intellect
Subjective: Artistic and literary; appeals to the emotions
Objective
⮚Science books, tourism brochures, police records, official files and classified ads.
Subjective
⮚Colored by the writer’s personality – feelings, moods, likes, dislikes, judgments and interpretations.
A topic sentence is the most important sentence in a paragraph.
The controlling idea is the main idea that the writer is developing in a composition. The controlling idea usually expresses a definite opinion or attitude about the topic of the composition.
Guidelines to build effective descriptions into paragraphs:
Include only relevant details.
Keep the description focused
Make sure that the description fits the paragraph’s tone and point of view.
Spatial order
A description usually follows a pattern of organization
It is the arrangement of items according to their physical position or relationship.