Structure

• The first stanza has a slow, turgid pace due to the first sentence layering clause on top of clause. This creates a turgid tone, reflecting the soldiers’ feeling that the march will never end.
• However, the second stanza is fast paced through one word sentences and exclamation marks. This reflects the sense of panic as the gas attack unfolds.
• The pace slows again in the final stanza to reflect the feeling that war is never ending. Owen uses the second person(“you”, “my friend”) to address the reader personally, creating an uncomfortable and accusatory tone. These final lines are clearly aimed at those in command.