Cliched phallic imagery. Frames the story as a 'sexual awakening', deliberately parodying a particular type of erotic literature. Plosives enhance this. We get a sense that the narrator sees her younger self as an entirely different person, and this detached narrative perspective puts the reader at a distance from the characters perspectives.
away from girlhood, away from the white, enclosed quietude of my mother's apartment, into the unguessable country of marriage'
Loss of girlhood, the journey of girlhood to womanhood, and "white enclosed quietude" takes her away from her purity and safe "enclosed" environments and into the "unguessable" country of marriage reflective of marriage and it's vastness, her sexual inexperience, drawing her away from her virginity.
"the narrow bedroom I had left forever, folding up and putting away all my little relics"
Contradicting the castles spatial vastness , recognising the comfort and predictability of home. "my little relics" , packing up objects from the past to distance herself from her girlhood , the putting away of her childhood innocence.
"there was a dress for her too; black silk, with the dull prismatic sheen of oil on water "
Funereal attire, mourning the loss of her daughters innocence. Foreshadows the Marquis intentions. Oil on water representative of things that are not meant to mix, foreshadows the discomfort of the narrator and the Marquis union.
The girl's initial description of her mother illustrates her powerful nature as eagles are foresighted creatures, her mother knows that the Marquis has ill intentions.
She is marrying into wealth, not for love, contradicting her mother who "beggared herself for love" , depicting a similar strength as her mother but in different aspects.
"he had invited me to join his gallery of beautiful women"
Objectification, these women are part of a catalogue and simply identified by their beauty and the characteristics that "you could tell she would die young".
"His wedding gift, clasped round my throat. A choker of rubies, two inches wide, like an extraordinarily precious slit throat."
"bright as arterial blood"
The ruby choker mocks the beheading of aristocrats in the past, pre determines The Marquis intentions, and marks her for death, (Similar to Dracula). Foreshadows the speaker escaping the guillotine.
" I saw him watching me in the gilded mirrors with the assessing eye of a connoisseur inspecting horseflesh"
"the sheer carnal avarice of it"
"and for the first time in my innocent and confined life, I sensed in myself a potentiality for corruption that took my breath away, I fely a strange impersonal arousal, and at the same time a repugnance I could not stifle...I longed for him and he disgusted me."
Gilded mirrors often act as a separation of self, an expression of the duality of sexual agency and innocence, when the speaker looks in the Mirror when her and the Marquis consummates their marriage "she sensed a potential for corruption" .
lf in the mirror. Angela Carter says that these two sides of female sexuality 'mutually reflect and complement one another, like a pair of mirrors'.
Unable to hide from herself.
Many Critics have argued against the feminist readings of The Bloody Chamber as they argue that Angela Carter attempts so display the idea that Women enjoy their own objectification.
Seals the heroines fate as the island is completely isolated from civilisation, liminality, breaking from the romantic to discover the reality of the situation.
"And surrounded by so many mirrors! Mirrors on the walls, .... he'd filled the room with them, to greet the bride, the young bride. The young bride, who had become the multitude of girls I saw in the mirrors"
Disassociated from sexuality , out of body experience,
"A dozen husbands approached me in a dozen mirrors (later) a dozen husbands impaled a dozen wives... he twined his fingers in my hair until I winced" (Just before the execution) "Twisting my hair into a rope"
Sexual intimidation, foreshadowing the execution, looking in the mirrors, an out of body experience. Angela Carter says that these two sides of female sexuality 'mutually reflect and complement one another, like a pair of mirrors'.
"stripping the leaves of an artichoke... nothing but my scarlet, palpitating core remained... bare as a lamb chop... I was aghast to feel myself stirring"
The girl is undressed by the Marquis: ambivalence at being sexualised
Intertextual fairy tale reference from Little Red Riding Hood, reinforces the speakers girlhood after being patronised for it. The Marquis is the wolf in this scenario , demonstrating his physical domineering prowess.