The first three stanzas are rhyming couplets, traditionally associated with love poetry, but the rhyme scheme weakens, suggesting difficulties in the relationship
search for oneself after being lost in conflict and war
"the frozen river ran through his face"
the river is a metaphor for the emotions that are frozen in his face
permanent physical scarring on the mans face
"the blown hinge of his lower jaw
could be a physical description of her husband due to the impact of war on his body
could be a metaphor of he husband's mental state which is preventing him from talking which leads to him keeping his emotions to himself
"the damaged porcelain bone"
connotations of fragility
double entendre - porcelain is both fragile and beautiful
collar bone is close to voice box so it could be implied that there is beauty in his voice yet due to the psychological impact of war his voice is fragile
“Frozen river ran through his face”
On a physical level, the adjective “frozen” emphasizes the permanent physical scarring on the man’s face; this reflects the brutality of war and its’ permanent impact.
On a deeper level, the metaphor of a ‘frozen river’ could signify psychological trauma as the scar goes ‘through his face’; Eddie has traumatic memories that haunt him.
To sustain the relationship the woman needs to break the ice.
Eddie has lost the ability to express himself, perhaps out of shellshock but there’s also the social expectation (contextually) to ‘man up’.
“Unexploded mine buried deep in his mind”
The adjective “unexploded” emphasizes the ongoing risk and danger, both to the soldier and those around them.
The use of “buried” is also significant because it has multiple interpretations; that it is a deep and therefore impactful injury, and secondly that there could’ve been an attempt to ‘cover up’ this injury, due to social standards or fear of being misunderstood.
"grazed heart"
unable to connect with his wife due to the impact of war on their relationship
difficulty in expressing himself as he is in a state of suffering
"parachute silk of his punctured lung"
oxymoronic - parachute won't work if punctured
since his lungs are described this way it can imply that he is falling further into to depression and suffering as he feels he cannot prevent his psychological demise
"foetus of metal beneath his chest"
juxtaposition: foetus connotes new life, birth and happiness yet what is growing in him is pain that continuously harvests his trauma
ironic: foetus is where life begins and the bullet is where life can abruptly end
metaphor: the wound is a part of him (just like a baby is to their mother) - emasculates Eddie reiterating that war is life changing
"could I picture the scan"
“scan” to find a bullet, which would aid generate empathy, as rather than the happiness of a child, there is the hurt and damage of a bullet.
"unexploded mine buried deep in his mind"
"unexploded" emphasises the impending risk and danger of Eddie losing it to his wife
“buried” is also significant because it has multiple interpretations; that it is a deep and therefore impactful injury, and secondly that there could’ve been an attempt to ‘cover up’ this injury, due to social standards or fear of being misunderstood.
"only then"
anaphora - suggests an ongoing journey (long process of recovery)
The poem
Describes the human cost of the conflict as it describes her experience on her husband's return and the effect on their relationship of the physical and mental scars that he bore
'The Manhunt' was originally aired as part of a Channel 4 documentary, Forgotten Heroes: The Not Dead, in which the painful truth of lives damaged beyond help is shown
In the film 'The Manhunt' is read by Laura, wife of Eddie Beddoes. Eddie served as a peace-keeper in Bosnia before being discharged due to injury and depression