● ‘Book of matches’ poem collection - short, intense poems with insight into family life
● Poems in the collection are around the 14 line length of a sonnet - most are about love
‘Acres’ ‘prairies’
hyperbole of vast spaces - can be daunting
‘one hundredth of an inch’ ‘metres’
Semantic field of measurement explores how far he can go without mother, symbolic for the time they have spent together
‘The spool of tape’
extended metaphor of tape measure - umbilical cord - physical connection or tape is connection stretched,when it ends he is ready to be independent
‘Zero end’
holding since birth
‘Unreeling years between us’
represents their history - enjambment = new phase of relationship
'Space-walk’
space metaphor - left his mother’s orbit
‘Anchor. Kite.’
holophrastic sentences slow the pace of the poem - showing thoughtfulness/apprehensiveness. He is the kite trying to fly, mother holding him back.\
‘Fingertips still pinch’
pain - hurts mother to let him go, but will hurt the son if she doesn’t
‘An endless sky to fall or fly’
no limit to opportunities, optimistic. Last line uncertainty – bird imagery of hatching and flying: breaks free of mother protection. Rhyme suggests some harmony achieved.
Irregular rhyme
shows the speaker’s uncertainty
Loose sonnet
Love poem, 15 lines so doesn't fit strongly- breaking free.
Themes and comparisons
Family relationships/independence/growing up: WALKING AWAY - diff perspectives, past to present shift resolution vs uncertainty, consistent rhyme structure vs erratic, imagery, separation pain, natural growing up vs hyperboles