Climbing my Grandfather

Cards (12)

    • I discover the glassy ridge of a scar
    • Trying to get a grip
    • I decide to do it free without a rope or net
    • Andrew Waterhouse 2000
    • I can only lie watching clouds and birds circle
    • His thick hair soft and white at this altitude
    • Knowing the slow pulse of his good heart
  • One solid block of text
    Representing the solid structure and impressiveness of both a mountain and his grandfather
  • Each line tracks the journey 

    Charts the growing relationship with grandfather
  • Free verse and enjambment 

    adventurous pace in which the speaker barely pauses in his pursuit of knowledge and closeness
  • Present tense
    adds to sense of immediacy and adventure
    • Partner poem: follower