Weir wrote this after the invasion of Iraq and thought of mothers, like Wilfred Owen's, and their emotions
Power of memory
poppies vs emigree
Effects on conflict:
remains vs kamikaze
Armitage and Garland: 'Educate the reader of the incomprehensible things that soldiers have to experience in war'
Anecdotal / conversational tone
'On another occassion' - many horrific incidents he's seen / matter of fact - used to it
'I see every round as it rips through his life' - remains
Determiner 'every' and alliteration - lack of glory or romanticism in killing
Colloquial language / verb 'tosses'
'my mate... tosses his guts back into his body' - disturbing nature of what is happening juxtaposes with the relaxed language
'enough fuel for a one-way / journey into history' - kamikaze
Adjective 'one-way' / enjambment - as a kamikaze pilot, he is expected to end his own life to make 'history' / enjambment mirrors his life ending
Simile - Kamikaze
'little fishing boats / strung out like bunting' - attractive temptation of life below as he flies / contrasts with the 'journey into history' expected - inner conflict
Armitage showcases the mental isolation that soldiers experience after war
Garland reveals how some can experience physical isolation, too
Metaphor - remains
'His blood-shadow stays on the street' - memory of war fatality lingers in his mind
Verb 'flush' - remains
'drink and drugs won't flush him out' - soldier uses substances to cope with his guilt / 'flush' has connotations of getting rid of something unwanted - war is what he tries to 'flush'
Loose rhyme used throughout
Creates a childish sense to expose how soldiers can become numb to suffering
Armitage interviewed soldiers who had served in the Gulf War and learned of their experiences with PTSD