Title- could emphasise Owen 'exposing' the harsh conditions the soldiers have to face which are never portrayed in propaganda.
"But nothing happens"
Repetition - sense of boredom throughout the poem highlights the pointlessness of war.
Could be a stab at the institutions in power who misuse the power they have by going to war and not looking after those who fight in them.
"Slowly, our ghosts drag home"
Metaphor- suggests that war has sucked all the life out of the soldiers and further reminds readers they are on the brink ofdeath.
"poignant misery of dawn begins to grow..."
Suggest the thought of a new day brings misery and sadness as they have to wake up and do nothing but freeze
"Dawn" usually has connotations of light and hope but it suggests suffering.
"Is it that we are dying?" "We turn back to our dying"
Rhetorical question- highlights the lack of fighting that's happening.
Blunt- adds to the pointlessness of war and creates an emotional image for the reader
Accepted the fact they're not being saved from front lines
"Our brains ache in the merciless iced east winds that knive us"
Personification and sibilance- sounds menacing and deadly, feels like it's stabbing them
Emphasises human vs nature
Highlights the pain and brutality of the cold weather
Could be compared to: (reality of conflict)
War photographer + Remains
Could be compared to: (power of nature)
Storm on the Island + The Prelude
"All their eyes are ice"
Metaphor- shows the extreme effects of the weather that affect the soldiers.
Implies they have lost their humanity + close to breaking point
"with crusted dark-red jewels"
Metaphor- blood coloured diamonds could refer to the cost of war compared to the value of life, suggesting that those in power prefer money over helping those fighting.