Poem by Seamus Heaney reflecting on his childhood memories of working on the family farm and admiring his father's skills
The poem was written in the sixties, just before the Troubles in Northern Ireland
Heaney cited John Keats, William Yeats, and Irish poet Patrick Kavanagh as influences
The poem explores the speaker's relationship with his father throughout his childhood and includes an interesting role reversal at the conclusion
First person perspective
The poem is written in the first person, making it intimate and personal
Past tense
The poem is mostly written in the past tense, grounding the narrative in childhood memories
The opening lines
Instantly set up the focus of the poem on the speaker's father and their relationship
Imagery
- Comparing the father's shoulders to a "full sail strung"
Describing the "clicking tongue" that makes the horse move
These vivid details demonstrate the speaker's close observation of his father's work
Heaney employs a solid structure in his poem to emphasise the role of hard work on the farm and how this contributes to his admiration towards his father
Cyclical narrative
Some part of the language or theme or narrative is mirrored or regained at the end of the poem from the start
Demonstrates the strong paternal bond between the speaker and his father
Shows how the roles between children and parents change as they grow up and age
Stable rhythmic pattern
Lines are around eight syllables long
Aids the steady rhythm of the poem
Reflects the stable relationship between the speaker and his father
Iambic tetrameter
Regular rhythm of four pairs of syllables, with the stress falling on the second syllable
Suggests an incomplete aspect to the paternal relationship, hinting at tensions between father and son
Quatrains
Poem is structured into four-line stanzas
Ordered in an ABAB rhyming scheme
Each stanza contains one perfect rhyme and one slant rhyme
Mirrors the feeling that Heaney will never live up to his father's aptitude for farm-work
Quatrains
Neat, stable structure mirrors the well ploughed fields the poem references
Could be Heaney commenting on how he is able to achieve a similar level of perfection, just through the manipulation of words rather than physical soil
Tight structure may reflect the claustrophobic, tight-knit environment that Heaney was brought up in
Transposed sentence
Changing the order of a sentence, e.g. "Yapping always" instead of "always yapping"
Could display traditional dialect or show how all consuming the boy's admiration for his father is
Passive vs active verbs
Unusual phrasing like "rode me" suggests the speaker is remaining a passive character by contrast to his active father
As the poem progresses, the active verbs start to be applied to the son more, and become present tense rather than past
Consonance
Heaney employs a lot of consonance, e.g. the 'k' sound in "sock", "pluck" and "clicking"
Could be trying to replicate the hard nature of the work his father is completing
Provides a sturdy, stable rhythm to the poem
Rural imagery & technical language
Intense focus on rural and natural language, reflecting Heaney's upbringing and the setting
Also uses more technical farming language, which may isolate unfamiliar readers
Onomatopoeia
Words that sound like the object they describe, e.g. "pluck", "yapping" and "clicking"
Creates a texture of sounds and highlights the speaker's attentiveness to his father's work
Nautical references
Subtle references to sailing, linking it to the precise and skilled work of farming
Suggests both professions must deal with unpredictable weather
Admiration
Semantic field of admiration, depicting the father as an "expert" who was "mapping the furrow exactly"