Summary - Rossetti’s personal conflict between two loves - earthly and heavenly
Structure - ABACDBC - lack of structure in the earth;y realm - shift from rigid to natural - the innate connection between man and god // six stanzas - one number off perfection - striving for this spiritual connection with God
I took my heart in my hand
past tense - narrative distance /diacope + alliteration + verb - personal control / metaphor - lack of control regarding the passion of love
(O my love, O my love),
Greek chorus - societal norms / brackets - something enclosed private and to be dismissed - juxtaposition to God / ‘o’ a sign of deep pain or passion - reversed throughout / amphimacer
Yet a woman'swords are weak;
alliterative ‘w’ - sense of woe / endstop - constriction of women by society
similar to From the Antique
You should speak, not I.
endstop + personal pronouns - defiance of the norm - endstop - she still possess the last word
“You took my heart in yourhand / With a friendlysmile”
Flips to male perspective, similar to No, TY, John
juxtaposing pronouns - societal roles
“With a critical eye you scanned / Then set it down,”
He only values her beauty, objectifying her. Speaker prefers a relationship with God instead. Women as commodities - Goblin Market
eyes - symbol of temptation - he is looking through a lens of lust
“It is still unripe, Better wait awhile;...Till the corn goes brown”
Can be seen as a Euphemism of the speakers innocence and virginity, she is young and should not be ‘spoiled’ so quickly
Skylark is a symbol of the joyous spirit of the divine. This can be inferred as her waiting for God’s allowance on her having sex
Corn - Wait for the time of harvest which is in autumn which is the season of death and decay.
Cornflower - Men wore it so show their celibacy
“As you set it down it broke-/Broke, but I did not wince;”
Hyphen visually symbolises the break. Echoes the title “Twice” - a broken heart split into two, reflected by the two words ‘broke’
"Nor cared for cornflowerswild, "
symbolic of beauty, purity, fertility / relation - if they fade too quickly their love is unrequited
"Nor sung with the singing bird."
‘I shall not hear the mocking bird’ / rejecting masculine advances
“I smiled at the speech you spoke / At your judgement that I heard”
Sibilance adds to feelings of sombre - misses the love of her beloved
Could also represent temptation and betrayal. The spoke is harsh sounding to emphasise the cruelty of her beloved
"I take my heart in my hand, "
shift of tense - her present and never ending journey with christ -
“(O my love, O my love)”, “O my God, O my God”
The emphatic ‘O’ emphasis the love she has
Human love is seen as lesser and dismissable - this is seen with the use of parentheses as it is in a way limiting
Use of anaphora makes the phrase sound like a hymn - shows she is seeking redemption.
The speaker offers her heart as a confession of love. She has control over her heart and therefore her decisions - sense of vulnerability, she is taking a risk by exposing herself to the potential of rejection.
"My brokenheart in my hand: "
Psalms 147 ‘he healeth the broken in heart, And bindery their wounds’/ broken heart - split into two -
"Thou hast seen, judge Thou. "
‘I am the way the truth the life no-one can come to the father except through me / juxtaposing ‘critical eye’ - control of God
"My hope was written on sand, "
Matthew 7 - foolish man who built his hand on the sand
Ingenuine promise because words written on sand will fade away. Human love is volatile. Allusion to folklore - The Sandman. Sands are a symbolism of dreams and sleep. Shows her hope was nothing more than a dream.
Perhaps an hourglass - Her hope ran out or love was lost over time.