journey into bhutan

• Second paragraphs opening wordy- "is my Inst night in Thimp
• The use of present lease gives a sense of immediancy and including
• The adjective fel shows how new this place is for the writer-
• Leading the reader to feel as if they are experiencing is alongside her.
• Second and third paragraphs open with time markers: "A is my first
• Night and "he next morning" to show the reader that these are
• Early impressions of the place fresh experience explains why she's
• Feeling intimidated by the tennin.
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• Exaggerates the conditions. Factual/informative-little
• Sense of no
• Sense at no
• From h
• DUENEY INTO BUIL
• BEYOND THE SKY AND
• Slay close to them... Sense of ulnerability/anxiousness
• Loma and Sasha are her source of comford/more al home
• " dignity, unsers consciousness, Bood humour-but can
• Find no single word to hold all of my impressions."
• The use of asyndente listing shifts the tone to one of
• Admiration-emphasising how in awe she is of Bhulance canadians both being "erstart
• People. The use of the dash demonstrates her loss of words but the writer initially seems
• To summarise Bean's people which helps the reader to is hoping to pick up some of the
• Understand there is more to Bhutan than its beautiful
• Landscapes. There is depth and riches of Bhutan's culture, people "historical records show tha
• The extract ends on a positive note through the adjective
• Femarkable highlighting how impressed she & by Bhutan
• And expresses her admiration and deep appreciation for
• The country.
• "I am full of admiration for this small country that
• Bas managed to look alter itsels so well"- the short
• Sentence coupled with the first person pronoun clearly
• Expresses a positive connotation of Bhutan. The quote
• Is a contrast to the beginning of the text. However it could
• Be percieved as patronising because the phrase "look
• After itself be well might be interpreted as patronising,
• Even though the author expresses admiration. It could
• Imply a sense of surprise or low expectations, as if Bhutan
• Should be capable of taking care of itself.
• Immigrants settled in Bhajan...