Research that involves collecting and analyzing numerical data to describe, explain, predict, or control phenomena of interest
Writing the Results and Discussion
1. Background information
2. Reporting results
3. Summarizing results
4. Commenting on results
Results are statements in the main text that summarize or explain what the data show
Results should not repeat the data
Discussion
States claims about how their results integrate with and contribute to disciplinary knowledge
Develops arguments to convince the essence of the findings by highlighting the similarities and differences from the previousresearch
Discussion
More theoretical
More abstract
More general
More integrated with the field
More connected to the real world
More concerned with implications and applications
More likely to discuss the limitations of the study
Results
Reporting results
Discussion
Commenting on results by interpreting, accounting for, evaluating or comparing with previous work
Results and Discussion may be written as one sub-section or they may be written separately
Structure of the Results and Discussion Section
1. Background information
2. Reporting results
3. Summarizing results
4. Commenting on results
Move 1: Background Information
Re-state the research objectives/questions briefly before presenting the results of each
Move 3: Summarizing results
Summarize the main results to remind your readers of what you have found in your study
Note that each research question/objective should have corresponding summarizedresults.
Example of summarizing results
In summary, the effects of L1 background and experience with a particular type of accent were relatively minor factors in the ability to understand the L2 speech
Move 4: Commenting on results
This can be done via interpreting results, comparing results with literature, or accounting for results
Example of interpreting results
This indicates that describing the methodology of the study is an important part of the abstracts in these two disciplines
Example of comparing results with literature
This finding lends support to cognitive model of writing by Flower and Hayes (1980) and Hayes and Flower (1980) which describes writing as an intricate phenomenon holding three separate components, i.e. writer's long-term memory, task environment and writing process
Example of accounting for results
This can be explained by the Thai students' cultural background. Because the participants would have participated in the preparation program before coming to the U.S., they most likely were familiar with academic texts and could use that knowledge to assist their reading of the Academic Text condition
Conclusion and Recommendations
1. Indicating the aims, whether you achieve it or not.
2. Indicating Limitations and Significance
3. Making suggestions
4. Recommending future research
Conclusion
Summarizing the research by highlighting the findings and evaluating the study
Recommendation
Making suggestions based on the findings and conclusion of the study
Structure of the Conclusion and Recommendation Sections
1. Summarizing the study
2. Evaluating the study
3. Deductions from the research
Summarizing the study
Indicating the aims, whether you achieve it or not
Deductions from research
Making suggestions
Recommending further research
Drawing pedagogical implications
Data
Facts and numbers generally presented in tables and figures
Results should not repeat the data
Move 2: Reporting results
1. Present first the results in tabular or graphical forms depending on what is appropriate based on your data
2. Report the findings presented using textual descriptions
Evaluating the study: Indicating Limitations
It should be noted, however, that the size of the present research corpus was inadequate to determine the different sequences of patterns or cyclicity of moves preferred by both sets of academic writers.
Evaluating the study: Indicating Significance
The significance of the present study lies in the fact that it was able to compare the effectiveness of narrow reading and reading plus vocabulary-enhancement activities on the types of lexical knowledge acquisition and retention... (I22, as cited in, Amnuai & Wannaruk, 2013).
Evaluating the study: Evaluating methodology
This model, however, seems less capable of explaining L2 learners' insensitivity to the number errors involved in the present study, such as "several of the board member." (I23, as cited in, Amnuai & Wannaruk, 2013).