living space

Cards (12)

  • 'living space'

    title is ironic as there isn't much living space at all
  • 'not enough straight lines'
    metaphor for the fragility of their lives in the slums
  • 'that is the problem'
    enjambment and caesura reflective of the struggle
  • 'beams balance crookedly on support'
    emphasises lack of support they have, and literal meaning the buildings are not supported, showing the danger
  • 'nails clutch at open seams'
    connotations of desperation, people are barely surviving
  • 'leans dangerously towards the miraculous'
    its a miracle that the dangerous homes are still standing, religious link
  • 'someone has squeezed a living space'
    literal meaning as the stanza has been squeezed in the middle
  • 'even dared to place'
    their lives aren't secured, they have to fight for what they need
  • 'these eggs in a wire basket'

    connotations of fragility, family and caution
  • 'white hung over the dark edge'
    light and dark imagery shows they still have hope through the desperation
  • 'gathering light into themselves'
    have to instill hope in themselves to break the cycle
  • 'bright thin walls of faith'
    questioning faith due to their circumstances