living space

    Cards (12)

    • 'living space'

      title is ironic as there isn't much living space at all
    • 'not enough straight lines'
      metaphor for the fragility of their lives in the slums
    • 'that is the problem'
      enjambment and caesura reflective of the struggle
    • 'beams balance crookedly on support'
      emphasises lack of support they have, and literal meaning the buildings are not supported, showing the danger
    • 'nails clutch at open seams'
      connotations of desperation, people are barely surviving
    • 'leans dangerously towards the miraculous'
      its a miracle that the dangerous homes are still standing, religious link
    • 'someone has squeezed a living space'
      literal meaning as the stanza has been squeezed in the middle
    • 'even dared to place'
      their lives aren't secured, they have to fight for what they need
    • 'these eggs in a wire basket'

      connotations of fragility, family and caution
    • 'white hung over the dark edge'
      light and dark imagery shows they still have hope through the desperation
    • 'gathering light into themselves'
      have to instill hope in themselves to break the cycle
    • 'bright thin walls of faith'
      questioning faith due to their circumstances