mood changes with the moon, not always constant like love
metaphor
‘brown paper’ suggests love is inexpensive
spherical shape of moon could suggest eternal love never dying out
“like the careful undressing of love”
simile
we “undress” an onion by peeling back its layers; like how we slowly reveal ourselves in a true relationship
also a possible sexual connotations with ‘undressing’
“it will blind you with tears like a lover”
cutting an onion makes your eyes water, just like a relationship can make you cry
being in love is to be vulnerable with your partner
describing the good and bad of a relationship
“i give you an onion. It’s fierce kiss will stay on your lips”
repetition
taste of a raw onion can be overpowering and will last on your breath
in love, your feelings can be so fierce that they turn to obsession or heartbreak and the pain can take a long time to heal.
“take it. Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding-ring”
silver rings of an onion could symbolise a ‘wedding proposal’
verb ‘shrink’ may suggest the way relationships ‘shrink’ down into comfortable routines , unlike the initial exciting (and dangerous) start of a relationship.