thou shalt behold ber, hermes, thou alone if thou wilt, as thou swearest,grant my boon!'
lamia manipulates a god, shows her passionate intensity, willing to go against someone more powerful in order to gain access to lycius, error as this is what grants her access
lamia reveals what she wants, desires a new form, wants to be able to be with lycius, mistake as she allows her passionate intensity to drive her toward doom
i love a youth of corinth - o the bliss! give me my woman's form and place me where he is'
lamia's obsession with lycius, finally reveals that she wishes to transform in order to form a relationship with lycius, seems lust driven and slightly insane as they have yet to speaks
and once, while among mortalsdreaming thus, she saw the young corinthian lycius charioting foremost in the envious race... and fell into a swooning love of him'
emphasises lycius' youth (compared to lamia's immortality), fell in love without knowing him, clear flaws to her obsession
thus gentle lamia judg'd and judg'd alright, that lycius could not love in half a fright, so threw the goddess off and won his heart, more pleasantly by playing woman's part'
narrator seems to admire lamia's plan + the execution, while reminding the reader of her manipulation and lies, shows how their relationship can't last
love in a hut, with water and crust, is... cinder, ashes, dust; love in a palace is perhaps at last more grievous torment than a hermit's fast'
narrator showing how there's an imminent ending coming for couple, continues from part 1 to now at beginning of part 2, idea of finality and how love can't last no matter the place
one the high couch he lay - his friends came round supported him - no pulse, or breath they found, and, in its marriage robe, the heavy body wound'
errors of the pair resulted in the death of the one lamia loves, emphasis of tragic ending as apollonius is allowed to walk away after destroying two lives