Weir employs the dramatic monologue to subverttraditionalwarpoetry and provide an insight into the far-reachingdestruction of war by adopting the perspective of a grieving mother.
"steeled the softening / of my face"
sibilance suggests internal emotions of the speaker as she is attempting to maintain composure for her son
"all my words / flattened, rolled turned into felt"
enjambment elucidates her lack of control over her debilitating emotions of grief
"Before you'dleft" "After you'dgone"
the ambiguous euphemism for death connotes how she is unable to process reality of loss and grief
"leaned against it likeawishbone"
simile - connotes her fragility without her son, giving an empathetic and human view of civilian loss in addition to the experience of those directly involved in war.