The speaker has an almost dream-like picture of the past or it could represent the speaker’s pride in her homeland – she is shining a light on her city.
Metaphorically she is saying that she remembers only positive things. However, the word ‘branded’ could suggest that she has been physically disfigured by her experiences.
The poem is predominantly in free verse with no rhyme or rhythm, which could represent the freeing, childlike nature of the poem; her life in her initial country before being torn away
'They accuse me of absence...they accuse me of being dark in their free city'
Feels guilt about leaving her city.
Contrast of dark and white to describe her city, internal conflict she feels she was not accepted in her previous home.
Repetition of ‘they accuse me’ is menacing and threatening.
‘dark’ and ‘white’ also refers to racism: she is experiencing social rejection. She feels that she does not belong in her new city as she does not share their culture or identity.
Determiner 'They'--> higher powers stripped her of her identity, perhaps she is stripping them of theirs
'I comb its hair and love its shining eyes'
The poem acts as an extended metaphor for a lost childhood:
The metaphor implies that she has a maternal relationship to the city in the way through her unconditional love and protective tendencies.
This juxtaposes the depiction of the narrator having naive, childlike tendencies
The city is personified as a doll or a pet. Its eyes shine — a reference to the sunlight — which relates to purity, and she can love it as she wishes, despite it being taken away from her
Iambic Pentameter: a gentle, flowing movement, almost like a lullaby.
'The child's vocabulary...I can't get it off my tongue. It tastes of sunlight'
'child'- her vocabulary hadn’t acquired adult expression.
Perhaps she was banned from speaking their language, her entire identity. Maybe her former home was a totalitarian state with no freedom of speech.
Refers back to the sunlight metaphor - The language is so important and real to the speaker that she can’t not speak it; it is always on her ‘tongue’ (mind).
Rumens finishes with a full-stop, creating caesura, to imply that the speaker has been silenced in the way the state silences her.
'There once was a country...I left it as a child'
Poem starts as a fairytale, perhaps a motif for childhood; this is presented throughout-the picture made in her mind of the country she’s from was formed through a lens of innocence and naivety, suggesting that the place is not as perfect as the speaker depicts it.
Ellipsis creates a pause necessary for the narrator to gather their thoughts, increasing unreliability
Enjambment at ‘child’, symbolic of how the speaker’s childhood was cut short, or perhaps the speaker may have wanted to hold on to her childhood, savour her memory of it.