Remains

Cards (10)

  • Written in free verse
  • "His bloody life in my bloody hands"
  • "Probably armed, possibly not"
  • Repetition of "I see" emphasising visual horrors of the scene
  • "Three of a kind all letting fly" - analogy, soldiers described as cards in poker, which is a game of luck
  • "End of story, except not really," Volta, mood change
  • "and tosses his guts back into his body."
  • "Then I'm home on leave. But I blink" Caesura and enjambment
  • "not left for dead in some distant, sun-stunned, sand-smothered land" sibilance
  • "near to the knuckle, here and now"