For there in the ghastly pit long since a body was found
The tragic loss of the speaker's father
He mutter'd and madden'd
The father went mad after the loss of money
That old man...dropt off gorged from a scheme that left us flaccid and drain'd
Mauds father benefited from the speaker's family's money, in Tennysons life this could be a reference to Dr Matthew Allen and Charles Tennyson.
When the poor are hovell'd and hustled together, each sex, like swine
Reference to poverty in the London slums leading to overcrowding
When a Mammonite mother kills her babe for a burial fee
Infanticide, greed of family for money but also sheer desperation of the poor
Smoothfaced snubnosed rogue
Describing mauds brother
What! Am I ragingalone as my father raged in his mood?
Must I too creep to the hollow and dash myself and die
The speakers fear of inheritinghisfathersmadness is the same as the terror Tennyson had for inheriting his family's blackblood.
I play'd with the girl when a child...Maud with her sweet-purse mouth when my father dangled the grapes...the beloved of my mother, the moon-faced darling
The speakers relationship with Maud before the vast speculation and their huge loss of money
I will bury myself in myself
The speakers isolation and mental illness
Faultily faultless, icily regular, splendidly null, dead perfection, no more
The speaker sees maud as an object, empty of anything but her beauty
Luminous, gemlike, ghostlike, deathlike, half the night long growing and fading and growing, till I could bear it no more
The speaker is perhaps experiencing insomnia here- his fixation on Maud is the catalyst for his problems beginning. Death is associated with beauty from the beginning- sex and and death, memento mori
Village....with gossip, scandal and spite
The speakers hatred for his village reflects Tennysons hatred for Lincolnshire and its 'provincial stuffiness
Her father, the wrinkled head of the race
Mauds father has all the power and the speaker has an a cute awareness of the pecking order
Your father has wealth well gotten and I am nameless and poor.
Contrast between the two families- how one benefited from the vast speculation and one did not
I keep but a man and a maid
Highlights how much of an unreliable narrator the speaker is- says he is poor while others starve he still has two servants.
We are puppets...do we move ourselves, or are we moved by an unseen hand
Just as Nora is a puppet of her father then her husband, the speaker is controlled by God? Determinism versus free will
be mine a philosopher's life...far-off from the clamour of lies
The speaker thinks everyone in his village is cruel, want to be isolated and far away from them.
Maud...you milkwhite faun
The speaker sees Maud as unspoiled and virginal, a 'Madonna
Your mother is mute in her grave...
Your father is ever in London
Maud is actually quite isolated, other than the brother she is quite alone and has little support
A voice by the cedar tree...a martial song like a trumpet's call.....to the death....and myself so languid and base
The speaker stalks Maud and hears her signing a patriotic song urging men to go to war, he himself has no agency or purpose in life, this triggers him to do something but also warns him of the potential dangers
Whom but Maud should I meet? And she touch'd my hand with a smile so sweet
This very limited interaction leads the speaker to misinterpret this as love or affection- in reality this has a much larger effect on him that it does her,
she meant to weave me a snare of some coquettish deceit, Cleopatra-like.
The speaker already accuses Maud of trying to flirt with him, obviously a biased narrator as we do not see how she is tripping to entice him
Yet, if she were not a cheat [...] then the world were not so bitter but a smile could make it sweet.
Daughter ps inheriting the bad qualities of their fathers, same as Nora
Dandy-despot....jewell'd mass....oil'd and curl'd Assyrian Bull smelling of musk and insolence
The speaker apparently hates Mauds brother but describes him in shocking detail- perhaps the speaker finds the brother attractive and is trying to repress his feelings.
Well, if it prove a girl, my boy will have plenty: so let it be
Here is the interaction between the speakers father and mauds father- the agreement to let them marry. Again an arranged marriage, same as with Nora and Torvald. Women are 'sold off' to the highest bidder
She lifted her eyes....and suddenly, sweetly, my heart beat stronger and thicker
He feels physically better when Maud looks at him- a physical response to addiction.
This new-made lord...first of his noble line...gewgaw castle shine
The speaker resents mauds new suitor, he is the opposite of him- not money, acquired it. He represents the nouveau riche and seems to have been set up with Maud
What, has he found my jewel out?...a bought commission....what is is he cannot buy?
The speaker feels that he owns Maud and no other man should haveher. She is being sold/prostituted to the highest bidder-objectification of women.
This broad-brimm'd hawker of holy things
People rallying against the war, the speaker thinks this is against the queens will and should be punished as a crime
What matter if I go mad....to a life that has been so sad
At this point in the poem we are convinced the speaker has gone mad and sees his life as pathetic
She took the kiss sedately
Maud love for the speaker is minimal if even existent- she accepts it but does not reciprocate anything-just out of politeness?
Go back, my lord, across the moor, you are not her darling
This is ironic as, in his monomania, the speaker doesn't realise this line also applies to him.
Comeliness, red and white....six feet two...barbarous opulence jewel-thick
The speaker means to insult the brother but really is just complimenting him- further expedience to support him being attracted to the brother as he notices so many physical characteristics
A gray old wolf and a lean
Mauds father
Maud is as true as Maud is sweet...the sweeter blood by the other side...her mother had been a thing complete
Maud has, according to the speaker, inherited all of her mothers good traits
That huge scapegoat of the race'
All of Maud's father's bad traits have been passed onto the brother - pangenesis
Maud has a garden of roses, and lilies fair on a lawn
Maud has a beautiful garden (Eden, sexual imagery?). Also Rosalyn- someone Romeo stalked in Romeo and Juliet.Prelapsarian utopia (before the fall of man)
She sits by her music and books and her brother lingerslate with a roystering company
Maud is not particularly sociable while the brother is- trying to develop his political career. He is a 'manabouttown', looking to promote his career and find allies.
If I be dear to some one else, then I should be to myself more dear
The speaker thinks if someone were to love him he would heal from his mental illness
This lump of earth has left his estate
The speaker references the brother leaving the familyhome to visit his father in London