The Wake

Cards (9)

  • About his grandfather, a chest consultant who served in the Royal Navy.
  • Title associated with funerals and a celebration of life but also the disturbance of a boat passing through water - relevant to the life of the grandfather.
  • "he looks me straight in the eye, ninety years old, folded into his favourite chair" 

    Intimate connection. "straight in the eye" direct bravery, physically frail yet knows his own mind.
  • "he doesn't want this [...] to have the doctor plumb any further into the depths of his scarred lungs"

    Echoes On Going - doesn't want medical intervention. Semantics of depth compares his lungs to the sea.
  • "those two pale oceans/rising and falling in the ribcages' hull"

    Motif of nautical imagery - unnatural and sickly lungs.
  • "we both know there has already been a passing"

    Premature acceptance of his death
  • "a great ship"
    Homage to his grandfather and the impact he had.
  • Use of caesura in the final tercet, breaking up the lines. Represents the complexities of life and death.
  • "like the first sea there ever was/or that ever will be"

    Connection between generations. An optimistic celebration of life.