Ambiguous title. A homophone "father" - the father-son relationship and the distance they go together to resolve problems. Two men scaling a hill - going further together or becoming further apart?
"we climbed the Skirrid again"
"again" suggests it is an attempt to reconnect. Myth that the cleft in the hill was created by God due to grief of Jesus' crucifixion - father-son relationship.
"we stopped there at an altar of rock and rested"
Religious symbolism - shared reverence for nature. Father and son link to God and Jesus.
"your breath reaching me, short and sharp and solitary"
Sibilance, the rasp of his breath suggests fragility - his father's decline. Polysyndetic list emphasises his father's ageing, declining health.
"I felt the tipping of the scales of us/the intersection of our ages"
Key idea in his family poetry - physical journey acts as a mechanism for their relationship.
"shared the shock of a country unrolled before us" "together against the view"
Awe - an unchanging element in their relationship.
"that with every step apart, I'm another closer to you"
Enigmatic, complicated relationship. Link to reestablished relationship - the significance of 'Skirrid'.