Keyways

Cards (8)

  • "the last time together."

    Full stop compounds sense of finality.
  • "thats how I felt when we first met - an uncut key"

    Intricate reflection on the workings of memories. Argues that relationships shape people.
  • "until our key ways would fit as they finally did in that chapel [...] touching at elbow, shoulder, hip"

    Moment of perfect unity. Triple connection of body parts could be a reference to the holy trinity. Draws upon religious language to emphasise the gravity of the moment.
  • "like a pair of siamese twins, sharing one lung"

    Disturbing simile, suggests mutual codependency and vulnerability. A negative possibility of suffocation.
  • "our tumblers aligned, precisely, perfectly"

    Idealises the relationship.
  • "so when did the bolt slip? the blade break in the mouth?"
    Rhetorical questions, confusion and raw sadness.
  • Cyclical beginning and end "strange then"
  • Rhyming couplet at the end could suggest closure.