LANGUAGE USE is one of the clearest indicators of a well written text. It enables writers to effectively communicate ideas without confusing the reader.
An effective language is: Specific, Concise, Familiar, Correct, and Appropriate
Levels of Language Use
Informal/ Personal - slang, local expressions, text messaging
Standard/Academic - widely accepted words and phrases found in books, magazines, and newspapers
Business/Technical - scientific terms, jargons, and special expressions
Principles in Language Use/ Diction
Use clear and concise sentences, usually about 18 words long.
Avoid redundancies, cliches wordiness, and highfalutin
Although may be used, avoid overusing “There” and “It”, drop it
Use precise vocabulary. Be accurate. Condensed.
Be consistent in pronoun POV
Avoid sexist language.
Use appropriate level of formality
MECHANICS focuses on the technicalities of the structure. It determines errors on subject-verb agreement, prepositions, tenses, the grammar, spelling, capitalization, abbreviations and acronyms, the use of numbers as part of the statement, and the punctuation marks.
PERIOD (.)
Used after sentences, in abbreviations, and as decimals
After independent clauses to introduce elements. "The coach demanded three things from his players: loyalty, devotion, and teamwork."/ to separate items in numerals, ratios, titles and subtitles, time references, scripture references
To show sudden break of thought "Ted was angry after his car was stolen—who wouldn't be?"/to set off an introduction to a series "They have everything needed to succeed—ideas, money, and marketing."
To join independent clauses when and, or, yet, but, or so are not present, to separate items in a series that contains commas "The governor will meet with Rey Simon, the mayor of Concepcion; Bert Vesca, the vice mayor; and Peter Cayabyab."
To signal pauses and shifts in sentences, used with and, or, so, but, yet to join independent clauses "Chinatown is a popular tourist attraction, and it serves as an important cultural center."